My main area of weakness is terminology as my essay lacked a wide range of camera, editing, sound and mise en scene terminology. In the future I will take steps to rectify this issue for example: I will incorporate detailed and relevant camera shots as well as editing terms thus increasing the level of my essay.
Camera shots that I will ensure I include:
- Medium Long Shot
- Establishing Shot
- Wide Shot
- Medium Close Up
- Big Close Up
- Long Shot
These technical camera terms will increase the terminology mark of my essay in turn the overall mark of my essay itself. So, terminology will be my main focus from now on when writing media essays.
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Similarly, the camera work in the attacking scene shows a counter typical representation of men when confronted with danger. When the Saber-tooth tiger attacks, the man hides in a hole and is seen whimpering and cowering away from the animal. The medium long shot of the man, pictured at a low angle, connotes fear and lack of control compared with the dominating view of the animal. The contrast of a low angle, medium long shot for the man and a high angle, medium close up for the women shows that the woman is more powerful within this situation than the man is.
Throughout this scene, continuity editing can be seen which creates a more realistic and immersive viewing experience for the audience. When the Saber-tooth tiger attacks, mud can be seen falling on the camera which adds to the tense and fearful atmosphere that is being created throughout the scene.
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